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I'm a London-based English teacher and occasionally I provide model essays I've written live in class.

I'm a London-based English teacher and occasionally I provide model essays I've written live in class.
Model essay Macbeth as a hero
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Model essay Macbeth as a hero

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An essay which I modelled live in class in 45 minutes for the AQA English Literature Paper 1 specimen 2 question paper. I modelled the process of planning, writing and proof reading in timed conditions. After writing it with the students’ input I printed it off and they had to highlight and annotate where and how I’d met the assessment objectives, and give it a mark using the mark scheme.
Model essay Frankenstein victim fear and prejudice
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Model essay Frankenstein victim fear and prejudice

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An essay which I modelled live in class in 45 minutes for the AQA English Literature Paper 1 specimen 2 question paper. I modelled the process of planning, writing and proof reading in timed conditions. After writing it with the students’ input I printed it off and they had to highlight and annotate where and how I’d met the assessment objectives, and give it a mark using the mark scheme.