I was born under a shallow red flag
Amid tattered vinyl and stacks of Observers
We drove cars with character
To peat bogs with character
We hung sheets across the windows
And draped curtains over chairs
I rested uneasily, an angry infant
Too young for football or Marx
I staged aerial battles
With my Fisher-Price Airport
And fought duels ‘gainst my brother
With bananas and bread
I remember your house
With the Bamp;Q kitchen
Apolitical sofas and emotive chairs
I remember waiting in Tescos
Sandwiched between Middle England
Hands clutched to South African fruit
The skirted swastika
I’d thought was your mother
Was still smiling, no regret and no shame
She coaxed me into eating that ‘Apple of Eden’
As I sat nervously
In the Bamp;Q kitchen
I returned home at seven
And flicked beads at the cat
James Euesden
The benefits of a regular poetry-writing group and a visit to the Arvon Foundation at Lumb Bank are evident in a strong batch of poems from the pupils of All Saints’ School. James Euesden writes with gentle satire and relish about a familiar world view from the 1980s. Setting is precisely created by the strategic use of detail: ‘tattered vinyl and stacks of Observers...We hung sheets across the windowsand draped curtains over chairs’ The young child’s unease is stated with irony in ‘aerial battlesWith my Fisher-Price Airport’ and ‘duels’ with ‘bananas and bread’. I’d suggest dropping the archaic “gainst’, and the condemnatory ‘skirted swastika’ which seems out of character. I’m impressed by the control of’nervouslyIn the Bamp;Q kitchen’, the dramatic ‘Hands clutched to South African fruit’ and the brooding tension of ‘flicked beads at the cat’.
CLIFF YATES