To what extent did English government respond effectively to the domestic problems which it faced in the years 1529 to 1553?
This is a very strong A* essay.
A-Level.
Tudors
History
AQA
Edward’s reign essay
History
A-Level
AQA
Option 1C
Tudors
Breadth Study
Source question
30 marks
Strong A* Essay
27/30
Shows excellent understanding of the extracts, good analysis if it is convincing, arguments of sources are clearly outlined, and all the extracts have been given equal focus. Excellent focus on the Mid-Tudor crisis.
Using your understanding of the historical context, assess how convincing these arguments are in relation to the existence of a mid-Tudor crisis between 1538 and 1558. 30 marks.
Sources are included in the document.
This is a complete essay.
It is an extremely strong A* essay. (27/30)
1771 words in total
Religious Studies
OCR
AS Level
The title is "Situation Ethics is too subjective to be useful for making important moral decisions. "
This is a full mark essay. Hamlet. A2. OCR.
Discuss the following passage from Act 4, Scene 4 exploring Shakespeare’s use of language and its dramatic effects.
History
AQA
A-Level
Option 1C: Tudors
Breadth Study
A* Essay
Full Essay
Shows excellent knowledge, understanding and arguments
Level 5
21/25 A*
Henry VII’s reign
“The popular rebellions faced by Henry VII gave him more problems than the threats posed by pretenders to the throne.”
This essay is a scanned-in version of the original copy.
English Literature A Level
OCR
American literature module option - Unseen extract question
A2
A* essay
Write a critical appreciation of this passage, relating your discussion to your reading of American Literature 1880–1940. [30]
This is an essay to an unseen passage showing good context and language analysis skills. 28/30
This is an essay to one of Fitzgerald’s short stories “A Night at the Fair”
This is a full essay.
A* quality.
27/30
To what extent is Utilitarianism helpful in living a truly moral life ?
Religious Studies
OCR
AS Level
Strong argument, scholars and examples shown.
This is a 30/30 essay. The title is “There is no example of a loving relationship in The Great Gatsby.”
The Great Gatsby is American Literature, by Fitzgerald.
This is an AS level essay.
2529 words
Examplifies detailed context/ coherent arguments / linguistic analysis etc
A* Essay
English Literature
1.5 pages
The Great Gatsby and The Grapes of Wrath as key texts
References to other texts including The Sound and the Fury, My Antonia, Sister Carrie, A Farewell to Arms, Native Son and the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn
“Much American Literature centres around the importance of the family”
OCR
A-Level
A2
American Literature Unit of the A-Level syllabus
Scanned in version of the essay
This is a 15/15 essay. This is for OCR. The title is “Polonius is a wretched, rash, intruding old fool.” This is an A2 essay, not as AS one. One of the key assessment objectives is to show awareness of differing interpretations. Polonius is a character in Shakespeare’s “Hamlet”.
English Literature
OCR
American Literature Component
The Grapes of Wrath
The Great Gatsby
Full marks essay 30/30
A*
A Level
A2 Essay
Contention - The themes of death and grief are central to American Literature.
English Literature
OCR
A Doll’s House is the play (Ibsen)
Paradise Lost is the epic poem (Milton)
This essay is an A* A2 essay. (27 or 28 out of 30)
The title is - Literature is very good at exploring intense emotion.
Shows critical views
Detailed context
Clear comparison
Clear and developed arguments
2190 words
English Literature
A Level
A2
OCR Board
American Unseen Extract question
Write a critical appreciation of this passage, relating your discussion to your reading of American Literature 1880–1940. [30]
This is an A* response - 28/30
The extract from a past paper/ William Dean Howell is already included.
Shows good language analysis, context and an effective balance of the AOs.
A*
29/30
“Poverty and the struggle to make a living are common themes in American Literature. Compare the handling of these themes in The Grapes of Wrath with at least one other text prescribed for this topic.”
OCR
A-Level
A2
English Literature
American Literature Unit in which The Grapes of Wrath and The Great Gatsby are key texts
This is the scanned in version of the marked essay.
AO3 - 50%
AO4-25%
AO1-12.5%
AO5 - 12.5%
A very detailed and effective essay
3 A4 pages
This is an A* level essay.
27/30
Kantian Ethics
Religious Studies
AS Level
OCR
“Kant’s rigid approach to morality is useless for today’s society”
Shows excellent examples and use of scholarly views.
This is an A grade essay.
The title is - “The underpinning idea of purpose is the most helpful aspect of Natural law.”
This essay shows good argument and evaluation.
Religious Studies
AS Level
OCR