AQA English Literature Romeo and Juliet Example Responses
Two grade 8/9 Romeo and Juliet essays:
Explore how Shakespeare presents violence in Romeo and Juliet.
Explore to what extent Shakespeare presents Juliet as a mature young woman.
Each essay includes guidance on how to structure each section.
I have also included an annotated copy, with a success criteria linked to the GCSE assessment objectives.
These model responses have worked brilliantly with higher ability KS4 classes.












