A lesson to help pupils to improve the quality of their writing based around a fairground image. The lesson uses the Alan Peat Exciting sentences to develop a high quality description and focuses on precise and interesting descriptive vocabulary.
Suitable for Y5 and Y6
Matches the 2016 writing criteria for Year 6 Sats teacher assessment.
Resources contains:
- Class powerpoint for teaching including Alan Peat sentence
- Resources for planning using a picture and senses table
- A word bank of high level vocabulary
- A sample text and text with annotation
Suitable for Y5 and Y6
Matches the 2016 writing criteria for Year 6 Sats teacher assessment.
Resources contains:
- Class powerpoint for teaching including Alan Peat sentence
- Resources for planning using a picture and senses table
- A word bank of high level vocabulary
- A sample text and text with annotation
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Great resource.
Can't wait to use this with my class. It looks fantastic!
Amazing resources. I love this website
Genuinely the best resource I've ever used . Have used the basis with other images to stimulate descriptive writing and my pupils have loved it. You have put Years 5 and 6 but I have used it with my years 9 and 10 classes and they loved it so I think every child from year 5 upwards would get something useful from it. Thank you so much for sharing it.
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