Look at what makes each passage boring. Discuss ways to improve. HA children can compare and contrast both of these birds using a range of openers, eg similes, adverbs, noun, connective or a feeling etc. Other children can just choose one they prefer and re-write it using as many ways as they can to improve it,
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