I offer resources aimed at UKS2 - LKS3, generally aimed at boosting student wellbeing alongside life skills, across the curriculum. My speciality is skill-based learning, including: collaborative learning, building attention, emotional intelligence & resilience, independence, creativity etc. Mindfulness, CBT, Forest School practice & holistic approaches underpin all of what I do.

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After many struggles in teaching persuasion and marking ‘persuasive’ writing, I developed this essay based on the need for teachers to have a free chocolate…all the time!

The bad example is based on the mistakes that the kids were making. The good example highlights sentence openers etc. that they can use…

I’ve used this examples with students at KS2 and KS3 - Modelling the poor example seems to really improve the quality of writing before we even begin.

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ellymorgan

3 years ago
5

Great idea to show good and bad examples - thank you!

jenteoesol

3 years ago
4

richt

3 years ago
4

Very useful. Thank you.

dxchr4

3 years ago
4

good example thanks<br />

pggrangernz

3 years ago
5

Great example thanks!

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