After many struggles in teaching persuasion and marking 'persuasive' writing, I developed this essay based on the need for teachers to have a free chocolate...all the time! The bad example is based on the mistakes that the kids were making. The good example highlights sentence openers etc. that they can use...


  • persuasive writing - good and bad - teachers in need of chocolate!.doc

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    user avatarwodewee15 days agoreport

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    This is a really simple but effective resource. Just what I was looking for to help my students gain inspiration for persuasive writing. Thank you for sharing!

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    user avatarjhidalgo15 months agoreport

    Great Resource Thanks

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    user avatarkidslick5 months agoreport

    Thank you. Perfect speech for identifying persuasive devices for my year 7s.