AQA A Level English Language NEA Commentary Lesson

This lesson is designed to assist A Level English Language students on preparing to write their commentary element for their coursework. The PPT should be introduced over two lessons and have examples of a commentary attached to it (I have included two examples from my students from previous years).
The lesson should be printed (certain slides should be) for the students to follow and assist their own levels of analysis.

To plan, get the students to have a look at the language levels that link together then create paragraphs analysing them referencing the style model as they go.

My biggest tip would be to get students to write paragraphs based on the language levels first, and then see if they can piece together the essay with those paragraphs. My students seem to discuss the style model too much to begin with, rather than analysing their own work referencing the style models.
Hope this helps!