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A description demonstrating what happens when students use too many language devices.

Aim to use this resource to teach students that less is more- controlling sentence lengths and describing relevant details only is more important than shoving in simile after simile!

Encourage students to improve the description by reducing the frequency of language devices and being selective with detail- is every detail necessary to include?

An improved description can help with clarity in writing.

Good luck!

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