pptx, 2.64 MB
pptx, 2.64 MB

A focused lesson where students improve their analytical writing by redrafting their work from the previous lesson and using structured peer feedback.

What’s Included

  • Starter on what makes a strong paragraph
  • Recap of last lesson’s success criteria
  • Peer‑review checklist
  • Redrafting guidance
  • Reflection questions

Lesson Overview
Students revisit their analytical paragraph from Lesson 7 and review the success criteria for effective evidence and explanation. Working in pairs, they complete a peer‑review activity, giving constructive feedback on clarity, language analysis, and use of evidence.

The main task is a redrafted analytical paragraph, where students improve vocabulary, explanation, and structure based on peer suggestions. The lesson ends with a short reflection on what they improved and why.

Perfect For
Year 7 English, improving analytical writing, developing peer‑assessment skills, and building confidence in redrafting.

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Refugee Boy

A fully planned, engaging 11‑lesson scheme of work for teaching *Refugee Boy* to Year 7. This bundle blends reading, writing, empathy‑building, and speaking & listening activities, giving teachers a smooth, structured unit with a clear progression of skills. ## **What’s Included** - 11 concise, structured lesson descriptions - Creative and analytical writing tasks - Speaking & listening activities - Success criteria for key tasks - Discussion prompts and reflection questions - A clear journey from context → analysis → creative response ## **Unit Overview** This scheme introduces students to the themes of home, belonging, identity, and fairness through accessible, well‑paced lessons. Each session builds literacy skills while encouraging empathy and thoughtful engagement with Alem’s experiences. Students explore key moments in the story, respond creatively through diary entries and narrative writing, analyse the writer’s language choices, and take part in debate and group discussion. The unit ends with a narrative writing task inspired by the experiences of newcomers. ## **Lesson Breakdown** **Lesson 1:** Introduction to the novel; prediction paragraph; “Safe Space” collage **Lesson 2:** First impressions; diary entry from Alem’s first hour in England **Lesson 3:** Hotel scene; analytical paragraph on abandonment **Lesson 4:** The Fitzgeralds; evaluative paragraph using the word *empathy* **Lesson 5:** Alem’s first week at school; diary entry **Lesson 6:** Asylum system; class debate on fairness **Lesson 7:** Analytical paragraph on feelings about the new home **Lesson 8:** Redrafting and peer review **Lesson 9:** Write Alem’s reply to his father **Lesson 10:** Group thematic presentations **Lesson 11:** Narrative writing from the perspective of a newcomer ## **Perfect For** - Year 7 English - Novel studies - Empathy‑building and PSHE links - Developing analytical and creative writing - Speaking and listening skills ## **Why Teachers Love This Bundle** - Clear, ready‑to‑use structure - Activities that engage all learners - Strong literacy focus without overwhelming content - Smooth progression across 11 lessons - Flexible enough for mixed‑ability classes

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