Task to get pupils assessing a piece of writing and improving it - focus on giving extra details/longer sentences/opinions.
I use things like this to help my pupils get into the habit of checking their own work for mistakes - all of the mistakes in the text are ones that have been made by my students at some point!
I've uploaded several similar tasks for checking verbs, adjectives & spelling/vocab.
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Brilliant starting point! Inspired me to start making a collection of this type of writing to use as other examples. Thanks.
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