You really need to refund my money. This is only one page of a photocopied plan that I can't even read. Absolutely disgusting!
DrFox22
8 years ago
Hello Katy, <br />
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Thanks for your feedback. I'm a little confused as to how you can be so disappointed with purchasing this resource on the basis that it does exactly what the title states, as well as being clearly visible in the preview page. <br />
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As far as I'm concerned, when i made this resource prior to my Y11s leaving, i sat with them and modelled how to plan the essay - step by step which is clearly numbered - from deconstructing the title and infering meaning from it, all the way to having a logical essay plan which they could use actively in exam conditions. <br />
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As I'm sure your years of experience will tell you, students can't plan in an exam the same way they would for a pre-prepared essay, so they need something simple and quick (which draws on their prior revision rather than giving them the answer) which will deliver them the full marks. <br />
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This resource not only does that, but it saves you the time of having to do it yourself. I have made no claim about it being your way or anyone else's way to plan an essay, but simply 'my' way which has worked for me exceptionally well in the past as wel as for this year's cohort. <br />
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Really sorry to hear you're disappointed, but i do think your review is unfair on the basis that my resource wasn't deceiving and you do have the ability to zoom in to read it more clearly, as well as being able to do this on the preview page.
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