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Short story following a five party story mountain - opening, build up, problem, solution, ending.
The story is based on the opening of The Hodgeheg, but using a different character (a young duck). It includes a lot of similar sentence structure and phrasing, but is possible for KS2 children to replicate.
A wide range of sentence openers (including adverbs, fronted adverbials and action verbs)
Emotion, comma sentences
Range of sentence types, including complex and compound sentences, relative clauses and short sentences for effect
Repetition of phrases for effect