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A Level English Language NEA: Authentic First Draft Examples Original Writing and Commentary (Anonymised Student Work)

This resource provides a carefully anonymised collection of genuine A Level English Language NEA first drafts, including original writing pieces and accompanying commentaries, created under live assessment conditions.

Unlike polished or modelled exemplars, these materials are deliberately presented as first-draft submissions, allowing teachers and students to see what realistic, authentic NEA work looks like before redrafting, refinement and teacher guidance. This makes the resource particularly valuable for demystifying the NEA process and setting accurate expectations.

The pack includes a range of original writing forms (for example journalism and discursive writing), paired with student commentaries that engage directly with audience, purpose, genre, register, linguistic methods and style models, in line with AQA NEA requirements.

All student work has been fully anonymised and is intended for educational use only, supporting understanding of:

  • what students can reasonably produce independently
  • how commentaries attempt to justify language choices
  • common pitfalls and misconceptions in early NEA drafts
  • the difference between first drafts and final moderated submissions
What’s Included
  • Anonymised first-draft original writing pieces
  • Corresponding student commentaries
  • A range of genres, audiences and purposes
  • Authentic examples suitable for annotation and critique
  • Ideal pairing with the AQA NEA mark scheme
Why This Resource Is Valuable
  • Shows real student work, not idealised exemplars
  • Helps students understand that NEA writing develops over time
  • Supports ethical teaching and JCQ-compliant guidance
  • Excellent for moderation training and departmental CPD
  • Encourages realistic target-setting and confidence-building
Ideal For
  • A Level English Language (AQA)
  • Teachers delivering or moderating NEA
  • Sixth form students beginning the NEA process
  • Departmental CPD and standardisation meetings

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The English Expert Complete Secondary English Curriculum Bundle (KS3–A Level)

## The English Expert Complete Secondary English Curriculum Bundle (KS3–A Level) This comprehensive bundle provides a **fully resourced, high-quality English curriculum** spanning **Key Stage 3, GCSE and A Level**, designed to support departments with planning, delivery, assessment and exam preparation. All resources are classroom-tested and written with **clarity, rigour and curriculum coherence** at their core. This is an ideal solution for departments seeking consistency across year groups while significantly reducing workload. --- ## What’s Included * **Complete KS3 Schemes of Work** * *Ghost Boys* (26 lessons) * *Asha and the Spirit Bird* (25 lessons) * KS3 SpaG Proofreading and Punctuation Pack * **GCSE English Literature** * *A Christmas Carol* – complete scheme of work * Power and Conflict: *Remains* / Paris Anthology activity pack * **A Level English Literature** * *Othello* (50 lessons) * *Death of a Salesman* * *Tess of the d’Urbervilles* * William Blake: Political and Social Protest Writing * **A Level English Language** * Complete NEA scheme of work * Authentic first-draft student NEA exemplars * *The Kite Runner* (Language and Literature) --- ## Why This Bundle Works * Fully planned lessons with **PowerPoints, activities, model responses and assessments** * Designed for **UK secondary classrooms** and current exam specifications * Supports **clear progression from Year 7 through to Year 13** * Suitable for experienced teachers, ECTs and non-specialists * Saves **hundreds of hours of planning time** * Excellent value compared to purchasing resources individually --- ## Ideal For * Secondary English departments * Trust-wide curriculum alignment * New or growing schools * Teachers seeking **ready-to-teach, high-impact resources** --- **Total individual value:** £21+ **Bundle price:** Outstanding value for a complete secondary English curriculum

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TheExpert1

13 hours ago
5

Excellent resource. Clear, well-structured and genuinely classroom-ready. Saves a huge amount of planning time while maintaining high standards. Highly recommended.

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