Albus Dumbledore Character description

Greater Depth Character Description Resource:
Perfect for Year 4 | High-Ability Writing Model | Ready-to-Use Example

Looking to inspire high-quality writing in your Year 4 classroom? This greater depth model character description is the perfect tool to showcase what ambitious, imaginative writing looks like at Key Stage 2.

What is Included:

A rich, high-level example text description

Showcases fronted adverbials, figurative language, and well-structured paragraphs

Includes character insight, not just appearance ideal for inference work

Designed to model greater depth features in a way that is clear and accessible for pupils

Can be used as part of a Harry Potter-themed writing unit or as a standalone model

Why You will Love It:

Perfect for a model character description in whole-class or guided writing

Supports your pupils in pushing their vocabulary and sentence structure

Great for classroom display, working wall examples, or editing.

Comes with an explanation of why the piece meets greater depth standards ideal for CPD or parent sharing

Bonus Tip: Pair this with a planning scaffold or writing frame and watch your class take off with creative confidence!

Make character description magical add this to your lesson toolkit today!