This document features a student’s paragraph, the teacher’s feedback and targets, a colour-coded paragraph checklist, as well as the improved version of the original paragraph.
Students can give their own feedback of the paragraph, before reading the teacher’s comments.
There is an additional paragraph on the same theme of injustice.
This can be used to show how analytical paragraphs for An Inspector Calls can be improved according to the AQA’s mark scheme for Literature Paper 2.
WWW = what went well
EBI = even better if
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