This resource models how to upgrade basic points to a more academic style/tone. The model uses Lord of the Flies. Students should spend time spotting the difference between the first and second paragraph and what makes the second one sound more impressive. They should then apply what they find to upgrading the ‘An Inspector Calls’ paragraph at the bottom. Encourage crafting/re-drafting.
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