2 model responses for the AQA 2025 Paper 1 Question 5 narrative prompt focused on technology breaking down. Both are aimed to meet the criteria for grade 9 using the drop, shift, zoom, leave method.
I have called one story ‘Rebooting Humanity’ which has an uplifting ending and the other ‘404: Future Not Found’ which has a more bleak and nihilistic setting. Both employ the conventions of the dystopian genre and include the little tricks to impress examiners such as a motif, pathetic fallacy, semantic fields, a wide range of punctuation , single sentence paragraphs and a circular structure to add cohesion.
I have also added 2 new responses about failure in technology that employ a kind of dual narrative involving two people separated in some way by a break in technology.
Get this resource as part of a bundle and save up to 79%
A bundle is a package of resources grouped together to teach a particular topic, or a series of lessons, in one place.
Bundle
AQA Language June 2025 Model Answers Paper 1 and 2
Model answers for the AQA English language May/June 2025 Paper 1 and Paper 2 exams. Includes model answers for questions 2-5. Includes 2 model answers for each question, side by side on each page, so students can compare the merits of each. One is aimed to be very high level while the other is aimed at grade 6/7. I have not included the extracts or the wording of the questions themselves. These are just the model answers.
£5.00
Bundle
AQA Paper 1 Model Answers Bundle
A large collection of model answers for AQA Language Paper 1 Questions 2, 3, 4 and 5 from past exams. Includes high level model responses for the past 3 exams: Summer 2025 - The Midwich Cuckoos November 2024 - The Glass House Summer 2024 - The Grass is Singing Summer 2023 - Life of Pi November 2022 - The Old Man and The Sea Summer 2022 - The Pearl Also includes lots of extra Paper 1 Question 5 examples with a focus on the drop, shift, zoom, leave structure, pathetic fallacy opening and using a motif.
£10.00
Something went wrong, please try again later.
This resource hasn't been reviewed yet
To ensure quality for our reviews, only customers who have purchased this resource can review it
Report this resourceto let us know if it violates our terms and conditions.
Our customer service team will review your report and will be in touch.
£3.00