This digital file features a high-quality GCSE and IGCSE English Language descriptive writing sample titled: Describe a once-peaceful park that has been taken over by a gang. It provides students with a strong model of how to create atmosphere, build tension, and describe setting in a vivid, engaging way. The sample demonstrates effective use of sensory detail, imagery, tone, and narrative voice—techniques that are essential for top-band marks.
What this resource is about
The sample answer shows students how to transform a simple prompt into a powerful piece of descriptive writing. It focuses on how a peaceful park becomes unsafe, guiding students to understand how to convey danger, mood and character presence without relying on action alone. This gives learners a practical example of how to meet examiner expectations for descriptive compositions.
Benefits for students
Students gain:
• a clear model of a high-scoring descriptive response
• improved understanding of structure, pacing, and imagery
• inspiration for their own writing pieces
• increased confidence in handling setting-based prompts
• exposure to vocabulary and techniques appropriate for grade 7–9 (A–A*) performance
Why descriptive writing samples matter
Descriptive writing is a core component of both GCSE and IGCSE English Language exams. Studying strong samples helps students recognise what top-level writing looks like, understand how marks are awarded and learn how to apply language techniques effectively under timed conditions. High-quality examples also support revision, class practice and independent study.
Who this file is for
This resource is ideal for students aged 12–16 preparing for GCSE or IGCSE English Language 9–1 assessments. It is suitable for classroom teaching, tutoring sessions, homeschooling and independent learner support.
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• saves hours of planning and writing time
• provides an instantly usable, exam-ready model
• boosts student confidence and writing skills
• supports teachers, tutors and parents with a clear, polished example
• helps students aim for higher grades through exposure to top-tier writing
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