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I have written two versions of a short story. The second is considerably better. The activity is to find the features which make the second version better and then write their own sentences which could be added to the second version to make it even better. The pupils are give words and prompts to help them write better sentences including adding adventurous vocabulary, similies, commas and conjunctions. Suitable for upper Key Stage 2 and KS3.


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