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An example diary entry text for The Hodgeheg written from the point of view Max, plus writing feature identification worksheet and answers. This exemplar text is perfect to use as a WAGOLL whilst studying Dick King-Smith’s book.

Resources provided:
• Exemplar diary text
• Feature find worksheet
• Feature find answer sheet
• Planning templates
• Text extract

The diary recount text contains the following language, grammar and punctuation features:
• Rule of three
• Repetition for effect
• Alliteration
• Emotions
• Rhetorical questions
• Variety of sentence openers, including fronted adverbials followed by a comma
• Variety of nouns to avoid repetition
• Expanded noun phrases
• Conjunctions
• Commas in a list
• Exclamation marks
• Question marks
• Apostrophes for contraction
• Apostrophes for plural possession
• Hyphens
• Brackets
• Semi-colons
• Colons

The diary text tells the events of Chapter 1 from Max’s point of view.

Pupils can read the extract and the model diary text, identify the features and then write their own diary entry from the point of view of Max, Peony, Pansy, Petunia, Ma, Pa, Uncle Bo or any other character from the story.

All resources are available as PDFs and editable Word documents.

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Other Hodgeheg themed resources:
Example Text Pack BUNDLE
Dialogue Example Text Pack
Character Profile Example Text Pack
Action Sequence Example Text Pack

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Four example text packs based on the story *The Hodgeheg* by Dick King-Smith. The example text packs contain Feature Find worksheets, answers, templates and additional resources. The following resources are included in this bundle: • Diary entry model text pack • Character profile model text pack • Dialogue model text pack • Action sequence text pack Each model text pack pack comes with a WAGOLL for pupils to examine and then base their own writing on. All resources come as editable Word documents and PDFs. If you buy this resource and are pleased with your purchase, leave a review and receive another up to the value of this one for free. Just email [helen-teach@outlook.com](mailto:helen-teach@outlook.com) with your username, the reviewed resource and the resource you would like for free. 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