English teacher's shop
English teacher's shop
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An exemplar Grade 8 response for AQA Paper 1 Q5 using cyclical structure.
Written in response to an image of a train platform.
This is my own interpretation of the level 4 mark scheme and how I believe that a student can achieve the higher marks on this question.
Please note that this is my own writing and is for use in the classroom. It should not be shared or published online without permission.


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