English teacher's shop
English teacher's shop
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Knowledge organisers Schemes of work for KS3 Full PowerPoints for KS3 and KS4 units of work Exemplar GCSE essays and responses GCSE revision resources Literacy lessons Non fiction booklets to accompany GCSE fiction Non fiction linked to Literature texts booklets

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A grade 8/9 descriptive writing response to an image.
Uses highly ambitious vocabulary, sentence structure and punctuation.
Uses a wide range of complex linguistic features successfully.
Description of an image of a car graveyard (image attached to response)



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a year ago

Really useful to use with students not only as an exemplar, but also for analysis of techniques.

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