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Top band, student written model answer for A Level English Language Paper 2 Question 3 on Language Discourses.

This essay demonstrates how to analyse the way that two texts use language to present ideas, attitudes and opinions in similar and different ways. Students of all abilities will benefit from an example of effective essay writing which they can emulate in their own work.

Why it works:

  • Shows how to structure an answer to this question that addresses all 3 AOs
  • Produced by a student who achieved an A* in 2017
  • This particular response was awarded 33/40
  • Can be reworked as a template for your future (brilliant!) essays

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Reviews

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cedmor

4 years ago
4

A useful resource re. structuring a comparison; however, I would expect a response awarded 9/10 for AO1 to label grammatical features, e.g. types of phrases and sentence types, accurately throughout.

kellyhalsall

5 years ago
2

Whilst the sample essay is useful, the names of the social media post users do not match the original article. I have had to go and change them. Having paid for this resource, I would expect them to correlate.

Smitchell86

5 years ago
5

teresa bleasdale

6 years ago
4

Great resource.<br /> Tried to download the accompanying texts but the link just takes me back to the TES homepage. Please can you advise. Thanks

biologywitholivia

6 years ago
5

Brilliant resource, thanks a lot.

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