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‘Outline and evaluate Ainsworth’s Strange Situation’ 16 marks

This poorly written essay is designed for students to pull out relevant evaluation points and restructure the paragraphs to gain more AO3 marks. All the relevant evaluation points are in there but the language and structure used needs improving. Teachers could then go through the essay with students using the visualiser adding in their improvements.

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