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Example diary entry text for The Iron Man written from the point of view of Hogarth after discovering the Iron Man, plus writing feature find worksheet. This exemplar recount text is perfect as a WAGOLL after reading Chapter 2 of Ted Hughes’ novel.

The model diary text contains these language, grammar and punctuation features:
• Similes
• Metaphors
• Personification
• Repetition for effect
• Onomatopoeia
• Alliteration
• Show not tell feelings
• Rhetorical questions
• Fronted adverbials followed by a comma
• Variety of nouns/verbs/adjectives to avoid repetition
• Noun phrases
• Coordinating conjunctions
• Subordinating conjunctions
• Apostrophes for contractions
• Apostrophes for singular possessions
• Apostrophes for plural possessions
• Hyphens
• Dashes
• Colons
• Brackets

Documents available as PDFs and editable Word files.

Answers for the feature identification worksheet included.

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Two example diary entries based on *The Iron Man* by Ted Hughes from two perspectives. Each model diary entry text comes with a feature find worksheet and answers. Pupils read and examine the WAGOLL recounts before writing their own versions. A variety of features are included in the diary entries, making the exemplars ideal for slow writing. Bonus: a set of quizzes, each based on a different chapter of the novel. If you buy this resource and are pleased with your purchase, leave a review and receive another up to the value of this one for free. Just email [helen-teach@outlook.com](mailto:helen-teach@outlook.com) with your username, the reviewed resource and the resource you would like for free. You may also be interested in: ✦ [The Iron Man Unit of Work | Four Weeks | Year 3/4](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/the-iron-man-unit-of-work-four-weeks-year-3-4-12723076) ✦ [The Iron Man Dialogue Writing - Example Text with Feature Identification Sheet](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/the-iron-man-dialogue-writing-example-text-with-feature-identification-sheet-12418927) ✦ [The Iron Man - Example Apology Letter from Hogarth with Feature Identification](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/the-iron-man-example-apology-letter-from-hogarth-with-feature-identification-12464111) ✦ [Example Non-Chronological Report About The Iron Man, Plus Feature Identification Sheet with Answers](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/example-non-chronological-report-about-the-iron-man-plus-feature-identification-sheet-with-answers-12464631) ✦ [Iron Man 6 Example Texts Plus All Chapter Glossary BUNDLE]( https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/iron-man-6-example-texts-plus-all-chapter-glossary-bundle-12464887) ✦ [Iron Man Example Texts BUNDLE: Diary, Dialogue & Non-Chronological Report with Features Sheet & Answers](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/iron-man-example-texts-bundle-diary-dialogue-and-non-chronological-report-with-features-sheet-and-answers-12438591) Visit [Helen-Teach’s Shop](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resources/shop/Helen-Teach) for more resources.

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Daniel-Forbes93

6 months ago
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This is excellent example text. Really good for a KS2 English lesson. Thanks :)

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